I am a 12 yr old child that loves to explore interesting things and
go on adventures around the world in summer. I have anger issues
which is why people say my temperature is like a volcano erupting.
What: Explore interesting things
When: In Summer
Where: Around the World
Why: Anger Issues
Falakika,I like that you spaced after a sentence.
Falakika , I like how you used the three key elements of a narrative introduction.
Falakika, I like the way you used the 3 key elements of a introduction.
Falakika, I like the how you have so much detail.