Me, Myself & I

WALT: Practising posting positive comments using google share


  Introduction
I am a 12 yr old child that loves to explore interesting things and
go on adventures around the world in summer. I have anger issues
which is why people say my temperature is like a volcano erupting.

 5 W’s
What: Explore interesting things
Who: Child
When: In Summer
Where: Around the World
Why: Anger Issues

Falakika,I like that you spaced after a sentence.
Jarrod

Falakika , I like how you used the three key elements of a narrative introduction.
Auckland

 Falakika, I like the way you used the 3 key elements of a introduction.
Alyssa

 Falakika, I like how you have so much detail.

Milan