Wednesday, 23 March 2016

WALT:Use powerful words in our story


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Why do we need to use powerful words?
  • To make our story super interesting.
  • To hook people into our story.
  • To make our story more meaningful and realistic.
Sc:
  • At least 5 powerful words
  • At least 1 simile
Today I saw a super disgusting old prickle.
It is round like a dollar coin.
It is spiky like claws.
It is very dirty like mud.
The prickle is extremely pointy and sharp.

It is really ugly looking like a muddy pig.

5 comments:

  1. i really like your work i like when you tipped the gruffalo

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  2. I like the way you put adjectives to describe the boomerang and i like the colors you used for the writing.

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  3. HELLO kika I like how you use powerful words and To make your story super interesting.
    KAPAI!

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  4. Hi Kika you did a great job and Keep up the good work!!

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  5. Hi Kika you did a great job and Keep up the good work!!

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