Wednesday, 14 September 2016

A Glorious Day

‘‘My beautiful gorgeous darlings you need to get ready for school’’said Dad.‘‘Ok we will’’said the oldest daughter exhaustingly.When they were finished they had some yummy delicious cereal for breakfast.Dad took them to school, then he went back home but before he left he said to them ‘‘bye darlings love you all be safe’’said Dad.

As they got up to the old bridge they started crossing,one side on the bridge started breaking and cracking on the edge of the old bridge then the side that they were on was starting to break the bridge was cracking,the oldest daughter told her younger sisters to‘‘ don’t be afraid you’re with me just believe in yourself ok’’said the oldest daughter.

They all started yelling for help, while that a helicopter was passing then one of the man looked down and he saw something it looked like dots the person controlling the  helicopter went closer to see properly when they went closer it was them they went to rescue them the people in the helicopter took them back to their dad and the oldest daughter said‘‘I’m so proud of you too for believing in yourself.

4 comments:

  1. hi kika i really love the powerful words and i also love your dialogs and it is really really beautiful.

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  2. hi kika i really love the powerful words and i also love your dialogs and it is really really beautiful.

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