Sunday, 26 March 2017

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The best basketball game

This morning skateboarding was cancelled so room 7 decided to vs room 8 at line basketball.

Room 7 and room 8 walked outside to the bottom courts, the room 7 boys were talking too much so Miss Ashley decided to put us in lines of boy girl boy girl boy girl, then we all stood up we got ready to run,Miss Morrison called five no one got the basketball inside the hoop, it was round 2,in round 2 someone from room 8 got it in then it was round 3 room 7 got a point.

In round 4 room 7 got another goal next round was round 5 room 7 got a goal again, as we continued some people were cheering some of us were sweaty and tired everyone tried their best and they were humble.

In the last round room 7 got a goal ! WE WON !!!!! YAY!!!!! We got four points, we won because we were humble and we tried our best room 8 got 1 point, as we were congratulating each other some of the room 8 kids were moving their hands away. We are humble winners and gracious losers.

It was a lot of fun, I loved it.


Marking my story!
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
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My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
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1 comment:

  1. Good start Kika!
    I would love to see more detail about what YOU did - I ran as fast as I could towards the ball! I was sweating and running out of breathe.

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