Tuesday, 7 March 2017

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The Hamburger ParagraphTopic Sentences:Yesterday we had house meetings to decide what we would do if we won.Supporting Sentences{1}:I went and sat down with group we had to talk to each other about the prize.Supporting Sentences{2}:As we were telling them our ideas Amau would write our ideas down.Supporting Sentences{3}:We all chose to go to jump.Concluding Sentences:I want my group to win so we can go to jump at the end of the year.


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